Tuesday, March 5, 2013

Love Unscripted by Tina Reber

**1/2

AA-List Movie Star. . . 
Ryan Christensen just wanted to be an actor. Never in his wildest dreams did he imagine a life where fans would chase him, paparazzi would stalk him, and Hollywood studios would want to own him. While filming in Seaport, Rhode Island, Ryan ducks into a neighborhood bar for a quick escape from legions of screaming fans . . . and finds much more than he expected.

Small-Town Girl. . . 
Nursing a recent heartbreak, Taryn Mitchell believes men are best kept at a safe distance. But when Ryan Christensen unexpectedly bursts through the front door of her pub, she can’t help but be drawn in by his humor, charm, and undeniable good looks. At six foot two, with dirty blond hair, blue eyes, and an incredible body, Ryan has every girl in Seaport swooning. But Taryn isn’t every other girl.

Relationship That DoesnFollow the Script. . . 
Despite her better judgment, Taryn soon finds herself falling hard for Ryan. But is their bond strong enough to survive the tabloid headlines, the relentless paparazzi, and the jealous fans who seem determined to tear them apart?


The Bad:
Love Unscripted began as a self-published book and is in serious need of editing of the minute detail included in the story.  Instead of adding to the story, these details bog and slow down the read.  Additionally, the sex scenes are also in need of editing and this book contains what is quite possibly the least hot sentence in any sex scene I have ever read and trust me, I've read a lot of them.  I won't tell you what it is, but you will know it when you read it.

The Good:
I like the premise of Love Unscripted.  It's an interesting story and I will be reading Love Unrehearsed (it's a little shorter so I am hoping it had better editing).  Also, Ryan's character has some really great dialogue that will make all the ladies sigh.

~Shel

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